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Carnal Knowledge by ~DataPhreak:iconDataPhreak:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open


I want to control you
For just an hour or two.
You can't object to something
With a gag in your mouth.
I want you to squirm before me
With sweat running down your thighs.
Resist me with all your might.
You will not break my bonds.
The leash is locked to the post.
You cannot leave your satin cage.
I promise in our erotic endeavor,
You will come to know me carnally.
It's easier when you play along,
But that's no fun at all.
I want you to beg for mercy.
My phalus has an ego.
©2004-2010 ~DataPhreak
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Author's Comments

More blah poetry. I'm on a roll tonight. :puke: :writersblock:

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~MemoryFinder Feb 22, 2004, 2:35:39 AM
wow-- don't much know what else to say... just... wow

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Harder than a drama
Softer than a porn


Wishing I was there... Wishing you were here...
:icondataphreak:
~DataPhreak Feb 22, 2004, 2:41:46 AM
You've said that once before. =P

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"Give a man a fire, and he is warm for the night. Set a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life." -Twain?
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~MemoryFinder Feb 22, 2004, 2:44:44 AM
hmm... i guess i'm not as creative with the feedback as i would like to be :)

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Harder than a drama
Softer than a porn


Wishing I was there... Wishing you were here...
:icondataphreak:
~DataPhreak Feb 22, 2004, 2:47:37 AM
I just thought it was intresting to get the same response twice on two poems with similar subjects.

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"Give a man a fire, and he is warm for the night. Set a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life." -Twain?
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~MemoryFinder Feb 22, 2004, 3:07:49 AM
Okay I read back through a few of my other comments... I think I'm on a roll lately with the highly "unprofound"--- so... "interesting" as it may have been... I promise to get more into it on other works of yours... he he its the only way i can pay ya back for the constructive criticism ya left on mine :)

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Harder than a drama
Softer than a porn


Wishing I was there... Wishing you were here...
:iconbloodred:
~bloodred Feb 24, 2004, 5:49:49 PM
It's so vivid! That's a very good thing of course.

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mmm, tastes like brains!
:icondataphreak:
~DataPhreak Feb 24, 2004, 6:42:49 PM
Vivid is good. I like vivid.

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"Give a man a fire, and he is warm for the night. Set a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life." -Twain?
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~Claire-Irene Sep 20, 2004, 4:24:34 AM
Omg.. That is sooo good.. Where the velvet comes in.. I don't know =P
On a different note.. Omg I'm so jealous.. That's awesome..
How I wish I could write..
:icondataphreak:
~DataPhreak Sep 20, 2004, 4:27:51 AM
Velvet, satin.... its all the same realy. And You can write. You have hands don't you? Thoughts? Put them down on paper.

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"Give a man a fire, and he is warm for the night. Set a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life." -Twain?
:icondataphreak:
~DataPhreak Sep 20, 2004, 4:29:43 AM
2 fav's in one night? I'm going to sleep well tonight.

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"Give a man a fire, and he is warm for the night. Set a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life." -Twain?
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